Hello,

When you look at the poem paper there are some chicken scratches on the left which were my notes for grading: organization, 7 points and transitions were worth 25 each, title, form and first sentence were worth 8 each, and one point was delegated if it was an error free paper(none were) underneath that is a listing of the 7 points that I could find.

a note on the organization of it. They compared Tiger and Spider. As they moved through the paper they should have kept mentioning them in the same order. In other words,
rhyme scheme
tiger
spider
then alliteration
tiger
spider
and so on
or if it was the block style it needed to be in the same order for each set of comparisons. It is hard to convey this in writing! see me if I have confused anyone.

I am sending out the comments on the historical person. I would like confirmation that they received it.

thank you!!
Mrs. VE